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Re: The Nightmare Smiths (Closed)
Vinn I remained at the conn even though the ship was on a fixed course. Being a raider was not an easy task, and there was no margin for error ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: Trouble in Gotham City (Started)
Name: Joker Appearance: Joker's most distinguishing features are the two scars in the corners of his mouth. He has green hair, and wears white facepaint with a red smile and ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: Immortal Struggles
Name: Lucian Moore Gender: Male Affiliation: Praetorians (I don't have a picture, so just imagine Chris Rock on anabolic steriods.) From the very first day of training, Lucian excelled as ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Trouble in Gotham City (Started)
As it says, I will be the Joker. :smt003 This will be fun... Ps: can't think of a better storybooker to play Harley Quinn than Leahweird! You must be on ...
Nov 22, 2011 -
Re: Beta-158: Chapter 2
I think it was "...if I chase you with a cattle prod" .
Nov 22, 2011 -
Re: The Nightmare Smiths (Closed)
Vinn I pulled the ship out of Earth's orbit with relative ease. The engines were misaligned, but I was sure the mechanic could fix that before they would encounter the ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Birathi (No longer accepting)
Taur Taur's size was a handicap, he was aware. There was little he could do in the way of stealth, so Wyverus was forced to go ahead by a few ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: Shadowed Tracks Chapter 1 (Tracing Shadows)
More nitpicks ;) Leahweird missed a few in my opinion. Watch your tenses. You are in first person, in past tense. Stick with it, and make sure you don't come ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Shadowed Tracks (Prologue)
Just a few nitpicks really. Firstly, watch your spelling, grammar, tenses and this will be a lot better. Check things out if you're not sure. For example, it's MACH not ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: The Nightmare Smiths (Closed)
(ooc: hell yes I will bust you -_-) Vinn I sighed when the Captain's order entered my conscious. The ship was in a static orbit over Earth, but still I ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: The Nightmare Smiths (Closed)
(ooc: hell yes I will bust you -_-) Vinn I sighed when the Captain's order entered my conscious. The ship was in a static orbit over Earth, but still I ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: The Nightmare Smiths (Closed)
That seems like a good idea to me ^ otherwise nightmare smiths is going to be archived :L
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: Birathi (No longer accepting)
Taur Taur could see the group was descending into chaos. Haven was baying for blood, more lion than man. Jenko and Fiergo wanted their sister back. And Wyverus- Taur could ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Flesh vs Steel (Started)
Cancer Cancer was just starting to black out when an explosion shook the tunnel. Eyes suddenly wide, he looked about himself. Bits of rubble began to drop from the ceiling. ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: Birathi (No longer accepting)
Taur Perhaps he had been too harsh on the necromancer. Not part of the team? Unlikely. Wyverrus was headstrong, mysterious, but he would not betray them. Of course, all that ...
Nov 7, 2011
