Critiq

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I don't cry at books a lot (and these were from much younger days), but I guess: 1. Loser, for the scene when he gets lost as it is snowing. ...

At 2nd pick: Still too blurry, foreground is too out of focus. Green leaves suck life out of nicer looking pink flowers. The cloudy sky is also just visual noise ...

If your struggling to identify your characters, you probably have too many. Or else you just need to hold some back instead of revealing the whole ensemble at the beginning. ...

I'll just do a quick review. First off, it's kind of blurry. Like, too blurry. I know you can't just go off and buy a better camera and such. But ...

Would've liked it better without they last sentence. A political thriller about the dangerous of biological warfare vs. mind control story. Hmm... But, as is, I give it 7/10. ~ ...

Another one bites the dust to Aggie! Ideas- -Six people whose lives have all been ruined because they all thought they inadvertently murdered the same person. -Some sort of parody ...

Oh no, Aggie's corrupted another one! Sorry, just read ATTWN in class and I totally despise 'pulp' or 'genre' fiction. I would definitely like to know if there are any ...

Orson Scott Card is pretty damn fantastic. Ender's Game is absurdly good and to Critiq - just so you know, pretty much everything in Science Fiction, is never, ever going ...

Ender's Game was a book I loved while reading it, but felt a little empty afterwards. Like candy, I suppose. The 'battle school' scenes are really awesome, but like action ...

1. Fahrenheit 451 2. I am the Messenger 3. Lord of the Flies 4. Animal Farm 5. Flowers for Algernon 6. The Giver 7. Ender's Game 8. Gulliver's Travels 9. ...