Critiq

There's too many planets out there for there to be only one with intelligent life. Our imagination of the form that might take, however, is ignorant.

Hello, I'm you. coughcough 2nd Person Narrator coughcough

I always root for the Yankees just to annoy people where I live (in Massachusetts, Red Sox country). So yay, I supposed.

I don't cry at books a lot (and these were from much younger days), but I guess: 1. Loser, for the scene when he gets lost as it is snowing. ...

Interesting... very interesting... probably not worth it but still, interesting...

I am scared and impressed. And being mental makes pretty much everything you write interesting, too. But... I'm going to back away slowly now.

Hello, world! Okay, so this piece is hardly my style, but I'll try to say something intelligible anyways. First off, I'm no grammar nazi, but this was very bad grammar ...

Just a quick observation: Every other line it seems like the topic has shifted. It sounds like the thoughts of an insane songwriter. Which is cool, but obviously not what ...

Great article, dear, but I think you mean STATIC characters. Not stagnant. :] They pretty much mean the same thing. Actually, stagnant is probably the more eventful word. About the ...

They all sound a little cliche. The War As I See It is probably the best, but the hardest to write (assuming you are not a 4 year old girl). ...

I think its less that the book industry is dying, and more that it is being forced to modernize after falling behind. Publishing, binding, and making a physical book is ...

Don't think this belongs here, but I won't argue. I don't know what you did, but personal apologies are usually better, if you are truly sorry. And for apologies, remember ...

With a few more exclamation marks this would be totally symbolic of angst ridden teenage girl poetry.

Wow, thats depressing. Definitely not a story-quality post but it's interesting all the same. So depressing though. I'd say something else but it'd just be a synonym for depressed. So ...

At 2nd pick: Still too blurry, foreground is too out of focus. Green leaves suck life out of nicer looking pink flowers. The cloudy sky is also just visual noise ...