Critiq

The more we learn, the more, we realize, there is to learn. Also, being a writer, I deeply value the computer and printing press myself. Also, going back through time, ...

Ultimately, it doesn't matter, unless you make it matter.

Are you suggesting I'm keeping secrets?

It's good writing, yes, but I'm afraid its already gone too far into cliche territory. I mean, Bermuda Triangle? Robotic monotone voices? Videos of some guy in terrible danger which ...

It's good (although I can't say good idea because it comes from a book), but there's no conflict or anything to make it interesting. Even the muse-ness falls flat because ...

Either 'eloquently put', 'the word of the ignorant', or 'I hate this game.'

Concisely put, why critique if you are not critical of anything? I guess I'm more in the position of 'writers should suck it up' than 'reviewers should ooze niceness'. Writers ...

It's OK, I suppose. If I was you parent I'd probably say 'Good job honey', or something like that. But overall it's just pretty dull. I mean, we've all seen ...

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2012? Kill me now. Or, in less sarcastic terms, I can't say I like that movie or plan to see it, even in the slightest.

I must admit, I found that very interesting. The interplay between italics and normal text, 1st person and 3rd person, is very confusing though. If it's dialogue, put it in ...

So, its between A Clockwork Orange and, say, Twilight ... I'll sure have to think long and hard about this one...

Fight Club is awesome, but I'm not willing to get a Facebook to find out how truly awesome it is.

Gotham Writer's Workshop: Writing Fiction Very excellent book. I've also tried Writing Magic but it is definitely geared towards younger, more mainstream writers.

Weezer turned way downhill with Make Believe, which was more emo-pop than alternative rock. Then the Red Album made things worse. And now? Raditude? A snuggie tie in? "Hipster Coolness?" ...