Critiq

Yay for junk writing. But seriously, that stream of consciousness stuff can actually make for good writing. It's in a lot of top tier novels like the Iliad, I believe. ...

Keep em' coming. I'd love to see a list of stories with not enough stars to be featured but enough to deserve a look. They shouldn't have to dwell in ...

Not sure about the word counter (it taunts me), because spam is a definite problem. 250 characters is just too little for a fair review, and now people will surely ...

It's good, first off. You don't see present tense that often nowadays. Extremely boring beginning, though, like you've said. The math is a really, really, bad way to start the ...

Hmm... not sure what I think about this one. Good piece overall. The flashback in the middle was pretty obvious, with the italics, such forth and so on. Watch your ...

The Russians. No one is pressuring me to say this. No one.

Those sad, sad internet explorer users.

Universal (from the dictionary): 1. of, pertaining to, or characteristic of all or the whole: universal experience. 2. applicable everywhere or in all cases; general: a universal cure. 3. affecting, ...

At the idea of universal right and wrong, I believe it cannot exist. If we all had a guiding sense of what was right, how could opinion or dissent exist? ...

I actually don't think so. The thing is humans, naturally, have a tendency to care most about other humans.

Kids nowadays...

This please? One of the first pieces of poetry I've done that I actually cared about, so I'd like a heaping helping of critique. I care more about general opinion ...

Its hard to critique thoughts. But I'll try my best. First off all, I do like this. It's not Earth shattering or even very special but it's quality. But down ...

On a steaming hot day As I slogged through the ghetto I crossed a cute girl In her red-hot stiletto Just look at her clothes She knows we guys see ...

The general consensus of footnotes is that they should never be in a work of fiction, unless you have a really, really good reason.