Critiq

Let's take a different slant on this, shall we? This writing is very good, just polish and polish etc etc etc. But your writing falls into a niche I like ...

If your struggling to identify your characters, you probably have too many. Or else you just need to hold some back instead of revealing the whole ensemble at the beginning. ...

Doesn't look very good, plus the Rotten Tomato Show really hated it. It's hardly recommended.

I'll just do a quick review. First off, it's kind of blurry. Like, too blurry. I know you can't just go off and buy a better camera and such. But ...

He can also resurrect the box office, defeat superman, hide his whole identity with a very small mask, and wear a cape without it getting caught in anything or tripping ...

Sounds cool, especially if you take it in the right direction. Is there any more info via post that I could read up on? I'd like to learn a little ...

Tongues of fire shot up from the ends of the stage as seizure inducing lights shot through the air, a cacophony of awesomeness and primal rock power shaking the crowd ...

I didn't know nuns were allowed to play music. Oh wait, there not nuns. Oh wait, there guys... Haven't heard em', but they look cool. Canadian + Alt. Rock = ...

Ooh. Someone turning the mundane of their life into an undersea utopia. Well, that works! I'm not one for all that waxy, poetic sort of junk, so I'll try to ...

Would've liked it better without they last sentence. A political thriller about the dangerous of biological warfare vs. mind control story. Hmm... But, as is, I give it 7/10. ~ ...

The title mislead me. But yes, totally agree.

I'll be brief. This work is two halves, both of which are interesting if improved upon a little. The first part, a man dodging patrols to trade with someone else, ...

I'd sum what this piece up as "It happens to all of us. What makes your case so special?" But otherwise, it was still rough. I won't deal with all ...

Aeroplane - Red Hot Chilli Peppers

I once wrote a nearly 50-page "short" story for 6th grade. Demonic thing about cursed chairs- or something like that. Got an A+, though.