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I've been meaning to read this book for a long time. I always get sidetracked. :( Should I make room to read it? :? Absolutely, especially since its plot pertains ...

Yeah, anyone interested in graphic novels should probably read V for Vendetta. It's not perfect, but the core idea is just so enticing its totally worth it. You can't be ...

It seems too goofy to be funny, but not totally goofy enough to be funny because it isn't funny. You get me?

Name: Jonathan Age: 14 Gender: Male ______ Top 3 Movies Title: The Hurt Locker Genre: War, Drama Title: The Dark Night Genre: Action, Drama Title: Fight Club Genre: Drama, Comedy ...

Devil's advocate time! So before I start, just remember that I'm only reviewing this because it shows great potential, you are remarkably undull, and your writing is the only type ...

I want to be a god.

That was funny. Funny in a way where I didn't laugh, but if someone asked me (like you) if it was funny I would have paused in reflection for a ...

I don't see anything wrong with it. It's like getting a summer job. You get some experience, a little money in your pocket, and then you move on to bigger ...

Well, we do need a way to get to the YWS HQ we have on Mars ... yws_office_mars.jpg The YWS HQ on Mars is a one room dilapidated shack? That ...

Simply put, cut out everything that doesn't a.) Develop character or b.) Move the plot forward. The best part of fiction is that you cast, costume, and create the extra ...

I would have defied logic more if I knew I could. Thanks, Nate. I'm going to divide by zero now.

Neither of them really should be/have been president, in my opinion. Everyone in politics is a scumbag. A scumbag or crazy. I don't know which one Palin is, which worries ...

Finally, a good prologue, I suppose, and nothing to follow? The universe teases me. It has a sort of stigma: you are constantly tugged forward to this seeming huge secret ...