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Re: Rainbow underground: the stone city
I really liked this story, it had an essence of nature, and was flowing, i really enjoyed it, mail me if you have any more stories like this one... A ...
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: "Lucky Me" Chapter 1
I really liked this story, it had an essence of nature, and was flowing, i really enjoyed it, mail me if you have any more stories like this one... A ...
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: The Charge Card: 2
I really liked this story, it had an essence of nature, and was flowing, i really enjoyed it, mail me if you have any more stories like this one... A ...
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: Co-operate and Live, or Disobay and Die
Oh... Thnx anyway
Mar 19, 2008 -
Re: Co-operate and Live, or Disobay and Die
Please comment, it would be appreciated
Mar 16, 2008 -
Re: Co-operate and Live, or Disobay and Die
“Co-operate and live, or disobey and die” I was innocent. I had done absolutely nothing wrong. I was born in Vienna in 1924, in the urban-decaying wasteland of Eastern Austria. ...
Mar 16, 2008 -
Re: Deadly Party Part 1: Introductions
really good poetry requires a really good understanding of language. You need to find ways to make words work for you. What words paint an image in your mind? What ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: The Past
really good poetry requires a really good understanding of language. You need to find ways to make words work for you. What words paint an image in your mind? What ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: A Southern Summer Soliloquy
really good poetry requires a really good understanding of language. You need to find ways to make words work for you. What words paint an image in your mind? What ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Camping Trip
really good poetry requires a really good understanding of language. You need to find ways to make words work for you. What words paint an image in your mind? What ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: you will be loved.
The language in this poem just doesn't do a thing for me. There's a way to use simple language like this and make it work in poetry, but you just ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: The Place
The language in this poem just doesn't do a thing for me. There's a way to use simple language like this and make it work in poetry, but you just ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Tourist
The language in this poem just doesn't do a thing for me. There's a way to use simple language like this and make it work in poetry, but you just ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Remake of Troy??? Beginning
More comments would be appreciated
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Limerick I
ok, i like the constructive critiscm... except for gandhi, or whateveer the hell your name is... You make a limerick then, go on.... have a go! That was terrible. If ...
Mar 9, 2008