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Re: My first Sonnet - A painted beauty
Hey Swottielottie,(like the name) I really, really liked your poem. It was very descriptive and reminded me of my favorite book Twilight. I don't know why it did but there ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: Rain!
Wow, This was a really crazy poem, but strangely, I liked it. I think you tried too hard to rhyme though: [quote]Children shouting in glee and making us exclaim "Oh ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: *Still untitled*
Hey, I'm not the best or most thorough reviewer in the world, but here it goes, I really liked the poem. It moved me but I'm a bit confused to ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: like any other mother would
Hey, I really thought your poem was beautiful. Truly. It was clever, I thought. I had a lump in my throat after reading it and I'm sorry that it was ...
Sep 24, 2008 -
Re: My story.
Good for you for getting back on your feet. I've been in the same situation in a sense, and know people who actually have, scum bags like that should really ...
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: Fallen_ Preface
Hey, AWWWW, I have a lump in my throat!. Please write more. I thought it was a really beautiful but short story Rikuku? kind of a weird name but I ...
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: Silent Melody
Hey, I was a bit confused with some of the word phrasing, but other than that, I thought it was really enchanting, I wanted to read till the end. On ...
Sep 21, 2008
