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Re: To an Unloved Rose.
Well done. I liked the rhyming and thought it was very clever. Keep writing! C.C
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: Words
Cool I'm first to review! Well damn, I hate you for writing that poem because it's amazing how true it is. I really, truly loved it. It was really good. ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: My first Sonnet - A painted beauty
Hey Swottielottie,(like the name) I really, really liked your poem. It was very descriptive and reminded me of my favorite book Twilight. I don't know why it did but there ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: Rain!
Wow, This was a really crazy poem, but strangely, I liked it. I think you tried too hard to rhyme though: [quote]Children shouting in glee and making us exclaim "Oh ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: *Still untitled*
Hey, I'm not the best or most thorough reviewer in the world, but here it goes, I really liked the poem. It moved me but I'm a bit confused to ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: Odd Poem
I'm having second thoughts about this poem, it was kind of a last minute thing. It's a bit odd, but then again I was told poems don't have to make ...
Sep 24, 2008 -
Re: like any other mother would
Hey, I really thought your poem was beautiful. Truly. It was clever, I thought. I had a lump in my throat after reading it and I'm sorry that it was ...
Sep 24, 2008 -
Re: My Brother Has A Gun #1
Hey October Fall, I really liked this story, it was a bit on the short side though. I'm dying to know what happens next so please post more soon. It ...
Sep 23, 2008 -
Re: A hole in your heart
Hey, I really liked this, it was different, in a good way. I was a bit confused as to what it was about but I did really like it.
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: Eva Rose
Based on a true story, Please review, I will put more up tommorow The sky was cloudless, yet eerily misty. Everyone's voice was a distant hum. I was locked in ...
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: My story.
Good for you for getting back on your feet. I've been in the same situation in a sense, and know people who actually have, scum bags like that should really ...
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: Fallen_ Preface
Hey, AWWWW, I have a lump in my throat!. Please write more. I thought it was a really beautiful but short story Rikuku? kind of a weird name but I ...
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: Silent Melody
Hey, I was a bit confused with some of the word phrasing, but other than that, I thought it was really enchanting, I wanted to read till the end. On ...
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: Alone with the Ghost
Hey, The Grammar wasn't great but I like the whole idea of the story, real scary!
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: Non Fiction Romance, unfinished
The plane touched the ground, finally after hours of praying the plane wouldn't crash and having miniature heart attacks every time the plane hit a bump, I had arrived at ...
Sep 21, 2008
