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Whoa, This poem is seriously creepy. There's something scarily realistic about it too. You made a few spelling mistakes. I've read alot of suicide poems but this is more realistic, ...

Hey, Well done, this poem was very good, I think you could have done better though. It really is like a poetic prayer. The only line I didn't get was ...

Please review!!!!! My dear sweet love, I must leave you for now. Although it kills me to do so, I must go. Know that I love you. Always. But too ...

Hey, Well done this poem is really beautiful. Very poetic and romantic. The last two lines were especially effective. I really enjoyed reading it. It's like something out of a ...

Really good. Well done this poem is very descriptive and emotional. I really enjoyed reading it. Very poetic. Well done and please keep writing. :smt038 :smt039 :smt027 :smt045 :D :smt010 ...

Hey, I LIKED THE FEELING IN THIS POEM. It was good. Just a few things. I find it hard to move around. I find myself constantly looking over my shoulder. ...

Hey, Thank you all for your good reviews. I really appreciate it. C.C

Hey, I really liked this poem. It was very descriptive. I nearly drowned once so you described it pretty well!. It was really beautiful. You asked not to comment on ...

Ok, I'm not sure if this is even a poem! but please tell me what you think! I smiled, sickly as the blood trickled down her neck. Beautiful crimson. Her ...

Hey, I love haiku's so I had to comment. Well done it's not always easy to write haikus. Very effective although I'm not so sure about the last line. Like ...

Hey, I agree with the others, it was a realy sweet poem and younger readers would enjoy it. I think it might have been more effective if it rhymed a ...

Hey, I really enjoyed this poem. It was really interesting, just like how a murderer should feel. I'm no grammar genius but I don't think you did anything wrong. It ...

Unsure about this poem but please review. There's someone at my window, calling out my name, I really wish I knew her, I turn around in shame. It's like I ...

Hey!, Firstly well done, it's not always easy to write poems like that, I know I'm useless at them. I really enjoyed the poem you had me reading till the ...

Hey, I'm not so sure about the grammar but I really liked the poem. The ending was very clever, Surprising. Well done, Keep writing. C.C