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Re: When you smile
Thank you all so much for reviewing this, its not ,my best piece but from the advice you guys have given me, I'll edit this and hopefully make it better ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: Mother
This is already a song.
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: Helpless?
Some people call her special, Some people call her names. Some kids poke fun and laugh at her, and exclude her from their games. So many operations, Have left her ...
Dec 9, 2008 -
Re: In your eyes
Thanks for both of your reviews! In the second stanza I meant she had bags under her eyes from staying out late and stuff. And when I used the word ...
Nov 29, 2008 -
Re: In your eyes
Sorry!, this is only rough but please let me know what you think!. I know what you want, from the look in your eyes even when you were a kid ...
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Why *did* the chicken cross the road?
A better question is, why wouldn't the chicken cross the road? touche :smt065
Nov 28, 2008 -
Re: Twilight vs. Harry potter
I don't think its a fair comparison. There are 7 Harry Potter Books and only 4 for Twilight ... so far.
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: Why *did* the chicken cross the road?
So it wouldn't get hit by a nuclear bomb..................................................................................duh!
Nov 25, 2008 -
Re: Evil Humans
I think they are born neither and are reared good/bad. Or they are reared good and then turn bad because of life changing circumstances or vice versa.
Nov 21, 2008 -
Re: Twilight vs. Harry potter
Harry Potter and Twilight are two completely different stories with different themes so comparing them is a bit ...odd. I really enjoyed the Harry Potter series but it tended to ...
Nov 20, 2008 -
Re: Crazy Little Thing II
Wow, seriously well done. This is one of my favorite pieces on yws!. I don't think there were any mistakes. You had me hanging on the first word. PLEASE write ...
Nov 19, 2008 -
Re: USA's Best President
Bill Clinton all the way! :smt038
Nov 18, 2008 -
Re: Won't Happen Again
WOW, I really loved this poem. I liked the way it rhymed and it flowed well. well done :D :D :D
Nov 17, 2008 -
Re: Why Iraq?
The war in Iraq has gone too far in my opinion.
Nov 17, 2008 -
Re: Capital Punishment
In some cases the wrong person could be convicted too. Imagine years of torture or being put to death for something you didn't do.
Nov 16, 2008
