Crimsona

My suggestions are in bold ; Now let us say what we must say ‘Till Death doth take us both away I like this line, it flows well and is ...

Aww this is such a cute poem! The simplicity of it, and it reminds me of my little plush animals.... *stops a moment to let out a happy sigh, then ...

This poem is pretty cute, but there is a lot of room for improvement. The whole poem is a little bit vaigue and doesn't really go anywhere. However, I like ...

Thank you for your review! :D I have made some changes. :)

Hello there, can you review my poem for me please? Thanks, ~Crim

Thanks for the reviews :)

Thank you Allikat! :)

It was at about 10am that I wrote this and I've left it untouched so it's probably full of horrible mistakes. I just want to see what the response to ...

Aww, a lovely poem. Really sweet, simple and really enjoyable to read. Just as a poem should be. Keep on writing this gorgeous work, ~Crimsona

Wow, deep, deep. Brilliantly written; I love the repetition of 'The Truth' and how 'The truth' turns to 'They' and 'They' turns to 'We'. Really powerful 'stuff' you've written there. ...

Beautiful poem, loved how you used showing, not telling. The flow was superb, just watch your punctuation, grammer and all that because some of the 'I's were uncapitalised and other ...

I can Hear The children outside. And as I do, I can remember... I can remember when I was that young. The mere five year old. Spreading Christmas joy with ...

Often I wonder, Why is “I love you” so hard to say? Brilliant question Why do we want to hide Another fantastic unanswered question And keep all of our feelings ...

Aww, this is quite a sweet poem. I love the sheer simplicity and quirkiness of it. Nitpick's though; It fills me with a simple joy. (You've used 'it' two lines ...

Wow. Deep, passionate poem you've written there! I really like it (I'm sure your teacher will/did too). Just a few nickpicks; My cuts screaming for savior. 'saviour' Also, the rhyming ...