Crimsona

Wow, it's been a long time since I've written a chapter, sorry about that. >.< I wrote this like last year but never uploaded it, so it's not very good ...

Interesting, I like it. It sort of remiends me of a diary in some ways. But maybe that's because it's written in first person. It's the sort of thing that ...

Red = Suggestions Bold = Opinions Green = Really liked this part The woods seemed to embrace Anwyn as she stood in front of the small rock house with her ...

You've got to be joking that this is your first real attempt at poetry, it's unreal! Unreal in an amazingly fantasical way that I can't really put into words! For ...

That first day, glancing across the chairs I looked at you and you looked at me I couldn't help but feel jealous of all the pairs Ignoring the music, looking ...

I wasn't quite sure what to expect when I started to read this poem. I thought 'Oh no, not another poem full of pointless questions' but it wasn't like that ...

Overall an okay poem, however there are many things that I feel could be improved upon. I will colour these in red and put my suggestions beside them in bold. ...

Rewrite of an earlier poem. When I was small, you showed the stars -- glittering eyelets against night's endless black sheet. It was then that I wondered what lied beyond ...

I was in the process of writing a random wolf novel and wanted to know what other people thought of it. I just went on Google and here I am ...

Overall I really like this poem and I can't see anything wrong with it. My favourite bits I will colour purple. These girls have always been my weakness. Not one ...

Firstly I'd like to say that I really liked this poem, I like how it's written in 1st person, I haven't seen many good poems on here written in that ...

Hehehe, South Park rules. I think you might want to put an age restriction on it thought because some of the words are quite rude.

Oooh, this is a nice poem. (I miss being away from the mountains too D:) I found it a little challenging to read because it was all in one lump, ...

Well, let me think... There's this one thing that springs to mind; When I was three I refused to put ANYTHING on my head. Not shampoo, not water. Nothing. There ...

So, thought I'd get into the Christmassy spirit and write a poem! Do please tell me what you think. Snow, Snow everywhere, Children, will you not come and share This ...