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Re: Faith
Wow this poem was very enjoyable to read. Very well written for a person of your age, though I'm not judging on your age because it is a beautiful poem ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Perfect
Yet another late night (well now very early morning) poem. Oh dear. >.< You may have the perfect hair, You may have the teeth, You might have the perfect air ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: Night of Perfection
Wow... Just... Wow. I can’t actually think of any other words to be truly honest. And a simple ‘Wow’ doesn’t really do this poem justice I’m afraid. I’m not much ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: In The Wrong
I like these lyrics, a lot. It gets a little repetitive, but because the word choice is nice I think you can get away with it. Very nice. Keep writing ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: Heartless
I'm sure that anyone who's reached the end of their school time can relate to this. I've just reached the end of my time at Prep school, ready to move ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Cancer
Yes, this poem is quite dark but most of my poems are. My friend's Grandfather died a month ago from Cancer, and my Mum's best friend died of cancer two ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: Little Love Tree
Just a quick song I made up when I was sitting in the garden taking photos. Decided to write it down and see what people thought: I look at the ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: A Rose for You, My Darling
Yet another picture of my gorgeous boy. How he is so photogenic I will never know, such a little poser! (Oh and by the way: He's a cat. xD)
May 30, 2011 -
Re: Feeling Fine - Feeling Feline
Title is a bit random, I wasn't quite sure what else to call it, since 'Cat Eye' seemed a little bland. This is a photo of my cat's eye. (his ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: The Spider's Secret and A Lady On A Leaf
Thank you very much you three. :)
May 30, 2011 -
Re: The Spider's Secret
A poem accompanied by a picture that I took. Enjoy and please let me know what you think. Translucent web drapes down, haunted with Secrets of distant past. Here the ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: The Spider's Secret and A Lady On A Leaf
I was just messing around with my new (well, second hand) camera and decided to take some wildlife and outdoor pictures. Please excuse the fail. The Spiders Secret A Lady ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Pretty Little Lucifer
Wow and double wow, this poem is incredible! It's not got anything particularly 'clever' or anything, but it just seems to work. For me it flows perfectly and if I ...
May 25, 2011 -
Re: Life is a Kiss
This is basically the second draft of another poem I wrote called Tights and Toothbrushes , except it's a little more shaped instead of all over the place. Still mostly ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: You Taught Me
I haven't written a poem in a long time. I've never been very good at 'hidden' rhyme schemes and they are certainly a complete nightmare to write, but it was ...
May 13, 2011
