Crimsona

Hey there! I really like this poem, it actually summed up the past week for me in many ways... So I just had to write a quick review on it! ...

Thank you so much for this review Sporky, it has really shined some light on what I really need to improve on. :) So, I decided to rewrite the 'burning ...

So, here comes chapter two! Critique is greatly appreciated, and if you can't wait for the next chapters to come out, you can find the seven so far, here: - ...

Hey there. I really like this piece, I find that it flows well and I thought the word choice was great. However, I did get a little confused at this ...

That's great to know Rosey Unicorn! I always thought that novels had to be really planned, consistent etc. Thanks so much. :)

:o Wow! I certainly wasn't expecting such good feedback for this piece of nonsense! xD x.x Reading over this again, I realised I changed the rhyme scheme about ten times, ...

Hey there Glim! Great to here there are some other atheists around here. It is actually quite tough being one, you get flamed (well, I do) by a lot of ...

Oh, and Russel Howard of course. :D Russel Howard = Awesome Frankie Boyle and Russel Howard are my favourite Comedians. Ever.

I really like what you have done with this poem so far. But if you would like some critique, here it is; I miss you I love my wife so ...

I only joined here recently (like... yesterday). I've just turned 13 and I'm on word 18,000 (exactly actually :/) of my novel. The one thing that is worrying me, is ...

I'm pretty sure that the first story I ever wrote that wasn't as simple as; 'My puppy is called Harvey. He is cute. I love him' :3 was when I ...

I was at this school camping trip thing. And I thought of this awesome plot for a short story I was going to write, which included someone getting suffocated in ...

After telling a few people that I didn't write poetry, it actually inspired me to write some. Please bear in mind it is definately in the first stages of editing ...

I really love the words you used in the poem, and the way that it is dedicated to your friend. I actually found this poem extremely moving, and loved the ...

xD I've never been much of a waiter, but I suppose here I'll have to make an exception... (joking) I think I'm sort of getting the hang of this Critique ...