Crimsona

Hello, I'd be very grateful if you could possibly review my short story?

I'm back! After about... a year? :)

-New Photos Have Been Added-

Thank you so very much for your feedback! It's so useful to hear suggestions and critiques from others as they can really help me improve! Thanks again, MorningMist. :D

Thank you both for your feedback! I do agree with you Sputnik, the lighting could have been better. And HPR you're right about the yellow flowers, they're quite dark and ...

Crim's back, but not for long! Hope you like this, another one of my 'famous' 3am writings. I really need to stop doing this... it's definitely depriving me of my ...

I'm back! But not for long, just to review a few things and see what you think of my new photographs! Enjoy, and of course, if you really like them, ...

Powerfully true. My sister's friend had to jump off her balcony window due to someone breaking into her flat. I was there when it happened and you have covered the ...

Very sweet poem. As another reviewer said, the 'make life bloom' was a little repetetive, but apart from that it was a cute and touching poem. I'd split it in ...

I actually really liked it! Sure, the rhyme scheme wasn't very consistant and it was a little repetitive, but the imagery was really good. I loved its simplicity and freeness. ...

Thank you for your reviews! I've made some edits.

Yet another of my poems written ridiculously early in the morning (2:30 to be precise). Definitely no excuse this time. My sadness walks your pages with a heavy tread. You’re ...

I usually review poems, but this looked interesting and I really liked it. The first two paragraphs remiended me of a book by Anne Fine called 'The Tulip Touch' about ...

It's a beautiful poem, it really is. Didn't quite have me in tears but very close to - divine imagery, very nice. 'Cadet Blue Eyes'..... I loved that, I could ...

I do like this poem, but I think you need to give it more structure. The ideas are very beautiful - but the rhyme scheme is mess. Sometimes it's a,b,a,b ...