Crimsona

Hey there! I love how this poem is made up of Haikus, I think the short verses really build up the feeling and coldness of the poem. But I have ...

Ah okay. :) xD Was it the one that Maroono wrote? (He's a good friend of mine and his main character is called Wind)

Thank you! :) I'll do that. Thanks again! :D

Thanks Kiwi! :) I totally get what you're saying about the random burning, Kirja thing. I should probably get rid of it. xD Wind? I don't think I've got a ...

Thanks Isha! :D What you said about dialogue made perfect sense and I never knew that before! (stupid English teachers) Thanks so much for your review! :D

Hey there Flower! :) Well, I only recently discovered what an Atheist actually was, and I'm still pretty sure that I don't know all the details of the exact 'faith' ...

xD F.R.E.D rocks! I can't find anything to critique on, it's just too uberific.... and that's not something I say every day! F.R.E.D must be very pleased that you wrote ...

As many other people have said; 1. this isn't a Haiku. Now for what I think of it. I don't really think that it flows that well... but I love ...

C'mooon, you know you want the yummy cheesecakes! ;D So, chapter three of The Kirja... will you review it please? Pweeeeety pwease?

So, here it is. Chapter three! :D Chapter 3 – Where worries start “What?” cried Lakea and Hail, jumping to their paws in surprise. Lakea desperately tried to stay calm, ...

Thanks Isha! :) I'll definitly take the run on sentences and paragraphs into account. :D Third chapter will be up... now? xD

I love this poem. I really do, though I have to dissagree with the reviewer before me. I really like the line Ruin my life In fact, I think it's ...

This poem is great! The title drew me in straight away and I wasn't dissapointed. xD I loved this poem, the way it flowed was really good, and writing nonsense ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem and liked your use of questions throughout the poem. However, some of your repetitions did get a little boring and could get slimmed down ...

Thanks CreativeFreak. :) I'll add in the punctuation/grammar that you suggested. ;)