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Re: Hybrids: Chapter 9
I'm glad you like Victor. Does he seem like a flat character? I'm worried he's too dull. Thank you for reading and leaving a review! -Mercedes
May 30, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 9
I'm glad to see you are still into Hybrids! Thank you for reading and leaving a review! Typos are my enemies lol. I will go back and read over to ...
May 30, 2023 -
Re: Magic: Chapter 4
Hi guys! Currently I only have chapters 2 and 4 for Magic but please check out @KaiaJersaga 's account for chapters 1 and 3! Thank you for reading!! -Mercedes :D
May 27, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 8
Yes. Is it too gross? I'm worried maybe it's too much.... The angels aren't allowed to use their wings bcs of the lack of space and Leader's rules. I guess ...
May 27, 2023 -
Re: The Fallen King: Prologue
Heya! You're very welcome! I am glad to be of some help! -Mercedes
May 27, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 2
Hi Kaia! yes and unfortunately our characters can't do anything but go along for the ride mwhahaha Yes several have mentioned how they would like to have more description . ...
May 26, 2023 -
Re: Rehenowa Chapter 8
You're welcome! I'm glad I was able to help! Yes at that point where it was said "old man" that's how I figured out Leo was older :) You're very ...
May 26, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 5
Hi! Thank you for reading Hybrids! Did you at any point of this chapter feel confused? Like maybe something wasn't explained right? -Mercedes
May 23, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 3
Thank you for reading and leaving a review! Do you have any suggestions for how to improve the pace of this chapter?
May 23, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 8
LOL! I love cliffhangers. This is actually the second time he's been introduced. But the first time wasn't like a "oh my gosh it's Leader!" scene. I laughed when I ...
May 23, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 7
Heya! Aw! I'm glad though that the chapter had the impact that I wanted it too. And yes! I'm glad the description is better too!! Yeah I figured I would ...
May 23, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 6
Yes it is definitely hard on Yagi. Unfortunately Sako doesn't really think about how others are mentally handing a situation when he's frustrated and upset. Yeah I kinda had a ...
May 23, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 5
You should post it! At least try it! You can also take down your writing if you don't want it up anymore. Yeah. Describing is a challenge lol. I'm glad ...
May 23, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 4
I'm glad you like the chapter and the art as well!! As always, thank you for reading! -Mercedes
May 23, 2023 -
Re: Hybrids: Chapter 4
If you would like to see drawings of Yagi and Sako please check them out on my wall!!
May 22, 2023