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Re: Completely Lost? Come here!
Hi, I have a question. How can I delete my YWS account?
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Two-Faced
Two- Faced your mask is no longer invisible everything has unraveled and I see it all. You had me fooled as you had done with everyone else. Perfect is your ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: relationship steps.
It's nice, some capitilization, unless that was how you intended on writing it? It's really sweet and short, the flow of the stanzas were nice, maybe you could of used ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: The Last Petal
Hello, I enjoyed your piece, it was well written, I liked your use of language, the flow was good, some stanzas didn't flow that well, but that's just me. I ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: My Stupid Teenage Essence
Hi! Aww, I loved this, really cute. I know not the best word choice. Anyways, despite it not having descriptive words, it's nice, it's just a simple poem, about well, ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: The Storm
This is my poem "The Storm", so let me know what you think of it! The Storm... The sounds of the roaring thunder, and the quickening flashes of lighting, the ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Curse creeping through the woods
Hi, I am a new user to this site, I very much enjoyed your poem. Keep on writing! :) I'm sorry if this wasn't a critical and detailed review, I'm ...
Feb 21, 2011
