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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Because

    Ah, I totally agree with the advice here. I think what happened was the personal experience I was basing it on was so caught up in my head that I ...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Paper clip (Contesst entry)

    I agree that you should exaggerate a little more. Think about creative ways you can put the properties of a paperclip to make it seem grand, or use the paperclip ...

    Jul 6, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Because

    I run back to that place we knew it feels like summer and looks like you but I stop myself like I should each time because going back there is ...

    Jul 6, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Roof.

    I find the poem very simplistic, but I think that was what you were going for. Even if you use that style, though, in my opinion it could still use ...

    Jul 6, 2011


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price