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Isha “Isha, Isha, come along, we’ll miss it” Grandfather called as he hobbled down the wonky back steeps. “I’m coming Grandfather, wait for me” Isha called, her wavy brown hair ...

Thanks for that, as you can tell my spelling and grammar is pretty bad!

I Love it! :lots_hearts: I've never liked Michelle Branch... this is definatly an improvement! Your sister should be proud! =D> :elephant:

wow i really loved this work so much, its really easy to relate to for everybody i guess but it really touches me as my best friend just turned on ...

Wow that was great, i was captivated! I honestly couldn't find anything wrong with it, the transition from one person to the other was simple and if there are any ...

10am Emily had vowed to get the class as a whole, she had survived the holidays living off the idea that soon she would strip an entire class of their ...

thanks- yeah i do have really bad spelling and grammar! And thanks for pointing out i never mention there age at the time, Emilys in year ten so shes 15 ...

This is the first chapter of a book I've been working on, I'd really like some help with it! 9am Emily sat at the back of the classroom, her eyes ...

Wow, that was really great. I loved it all - completly and if theres any grammatical mistakes i can't help you there 'cause i'm utterly hopless :oops:

This really needs some work, i wrote it while i was extreamly pissed off. (its all written about my personal feelings and experances) so i'd really love to get some ...

Wow. thats an extreamly powerful peice. Almost set us off crying (by us i mean myself and 2 other hostel girls who i am currently sharing the computer room with) ...

Wow....thats all i can say...I'm in the middle of a class and my teachers watching what i'm reading so i kinda had to run through it pretty quick buts still ...

Life, to me it is the dizzying affect you feel during an altercation with a loved one, It is the feeling of the wind, scratching at your clothing, pulling you ...

It um... was cute... but really it lacked emotion, it was sweet though... :D The truth is far from in her grasp The more she digs into her past. for ...

Thanks for that, yeah my spelling is terrible and my grammar is worse... blame bad teaching but other now i've been inspired to write more, i'll post asap.