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there were a few little typos...Lol! says the queen of typos...but other than that i think its pretty good, its just i was a little confussed when it started and ...

ok, im pretty bad at criting in general and when it comes to poems man! but just cause you asked i thought i should write something :D I really liked ...

It just keeps getting better and better, and that is in no way sarcastic! I love it, I cant wait to see more

I really did like your choice of words thought. great Imagery, i could really see them sitting in the doorway (oh i love does me dad...weird!)

alright im going to be competly honest with you, that scared me s***less! wow, its late at night and Im home alone and i just read that and now ive ...

Your description is wonderful, it paints a picture but i do have one issue. It was only mid-evening but already the sun had gone to sleep and the night sky ...

oh gee...barbie...that was a while ago *looks around nervously and hides barbie under the desk* lmao....thats really cool, brings back memorys.. great stuff!

thegirlwhofateloves wrote: Oh my more periods....I want to be male... tell me about it... theres more than no more periods...theres no more worring about getting more worring about "am i ...

*tear* thats really sad...theres nothing much else i can say lol its midnight and im sweepy but i just wanted you to know i think thats so sad and very ...

i think its sweet! lol and all i got my mum was some more tea towels...just kidding! thats really cute and im sure you mum is going to love it

I'm trying to write more but my friends keep starting conversations with me about Christmas and i keep getting distracted! Jessica's Mum run off when Jessica was v. little and ...

lol thanks Sam - what i was trying to say was that if she couldnt have her father sleep thought her crusades she would settle for him not knowing what ...

lol i dear! i did too, oppps. Lol like i said it was late at night when i wrote this...right ive changed it now..what do you think?

There will be more, this is just beginning fluff, after a old school romance conversation with Duskglimmer i'm going to try and direct it in that general directon with Jessica's ...

Where’s Mummy? Jessica tried once again to dial the number she had scribbled on the back of her hand, Her long purple nails attacking the telephone pad as she furiously ...