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Wow Duskie, you are so talented! I really liked this peice, for a little while at the beginning i was competly lost but thats just because I had a late ...

Whoa, Normally age shouldnt matter at all but you are an amazing writer for your age. It was a very cute and funny peice, life was so simple, back in ...

“I really don’t see the point in this,” I sighed. I never really saw the point half the things Luna wanted to do. “Just shut up and stir” Luna barked. ...

I really did like this. “Amala, come back!” he cried after her, but it was too late. The moment he knew she was out of sight he began to laugh. ...

Wow suburbia in New Zealand must be different. I love living in the suburbs, we have BBQ with neighbors and street party's and great stuff! but anyway I'm off track, ...

This poem has great imagery i really did enjoy reading it. Its a good length too, when i attempt poems they are always really long winding, everything i do is ...

theres not much else i could say that hasnt been said already *stamps feet a little* not fair! but i do really want to read more, definatly reasoning for the ...

iatt Good directors ate lots of baked beans when they were my age!

OK firstly i second what everybodys said, including Firestarter. You need to give it a little time before you expect people to reply. Log off the computer if you have ...

I dont want to clog everything up with repeats so i just back up everything Writersdomain said. Good Work!

it was pretty cool. Nice job I like a poem that's hard to understand as it might mean something different to different kinds of persons. I back that up completly, ...

ok now im scared, extreamly. That was um, scary and vivid. And yes, well it was er different. No once you get past the sick humour of it all its ...

Powerful! that will be a great song, honestly very sad and very good!

Why do people always kill of the cute ones? so so sad, yet very funny ive never read anything more amusing about a fridge full of sour lemons and rotten ...

That poor girl! i would love to see more. As for what the other two said im grammatically challanged so i can't comment on it :D good stuff thought