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Re: Between Love And War
hey there :) congrats on having the ambition the write a novel! It's a really hard slog but if you're determined and have your goal, it's perfectly achievable so the ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: Brothers Part 1
hi there :) we're just starting studying American civil rights from the end of the civil war so I thought I'd give this a read, and I'm rather glad I ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Cleaning Ladies.
hey :) good luck in the competition! Well done for getting inspired etc etc, although if you can think about putting the thing you got from the generator as an ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Hello Everyone :)
bonjour :D I'm actually english but I like to be odd linguistically xD I'm just back too - the other day I had my first creative writing inspiration in the ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: The Return (contest entry).
hey!! I'm back baby, and I PROMISE I'm not freakforchrist in disguise :P (she said, pretending to be in on the YWS goings on and probably failing miserably, due to ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Smile
hey :) I really wanted to come and review and say something meaningful that will help you but - darn it, there's very little I can say. That's all your ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Call This Hell
hi there :) you joined on my birthday! irrelevant information, but still. nice coincidence... I liked your story, but in parts it was quite unclear. The opening was snappy and ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Just a Nimbus
ah! avast! a fellow symbolism-ist! lovely to meet you :) You don't need me to tell you that your characterisation was great and believable, and that clearly you knew exactly ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Spinning Round and Round
oh hello again... apparently I've found all your posts in quick succession :) I notice that you joined yesterday, so welcome! I've just come back from being the Prodigal Son ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Trust the Voice Within
hi :) so... wow. Writing about something with such gravitas as this is really brave (I'm wrestling with a similar writing conundrum at the moment, and I think I'm going ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: The shadow
hey :) perfectly creepy! I love the idea of this piece, and it's wonderfully concise so I really got the feeling of this weird, fleeting encounter that was utterly absurd. ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: The Mathematician Problem
hey :) I'm guessing this is for the Big Contest, and so good luck! I like your sense of humour here (sorry, I guess that's "humor" for you :P) and ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: A Trip To Torture
hey :) for what you claim to be "jotting down of fears" this is wonderfully lyrical (haha, exactly like the forum says!) and flows really, really nicely. Your rhyme scheme ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Help with characterization?
hey :) sometimes I get like that too, and then I read back what I've written and the speech is either unbelievably cringey or just plain unrealistic. so now what ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: The Publisher
(12+ due to slightly dark content... it's not very explicit but the references and suggestions are quite nasty, because it relates to such a dark time) So this is for ...
Jun 13, 2011
