Cotton

Wow! What a cliffhanger! I'm itching for more! It's like the weird monster person in the padded room can read minds! Fantastic. Just a couple of things: --> Firstly, I ...

siobhan, I reckon yours is about a 7. In itself it is not the most attention-grabbing sentence, but it is one of those can that lead onto an almost infinite ...

My word, Bex! This is fantastic! You got the almost old-fashioned, oldy-worldy tone exactly right, with the little bit of dialogue clearly showing the different characters' characters (haha lol). Yeah

Hi! I only recently started to become interested in vampire stories, so I don't have much experience in this field, but I love the way you have the vampire as ...

(A little side note - just in case this isn't already clear: this is a novel kind of/type of thing. The first version was about 130,000 words, the second version ...

Hiya! Now I just want to make this point before I begin: for almost as long as I can remember doing poetry in school, I can remember loathing it. Poetry ...

Hi, I'm Lillie and I'm pretty new. My friend Becka advised me to get YWS (she's beckiw) and I'm so glad I acted on her advice - this is pretty ...

I think you got the opening just right with the introduction of your main character because you put in a fabulously detailed description of his appearance, then a subtle one ...

// This is a story I've been writing for a while, and this is like the third version of it (albeit it only the beginning). Please tell me what you ...

Well, I don't think that there is anything more that I can say that has not already been said! The previous comments all look very helpful in respect of improving ...

First of all - bizarre! You posted this on my birthday! Right, now for your writing! It was really rather funny, and I did laugh out loud in several places. ...

Wow! I don't personally know a lot about art, but this is really good! I like the way you've used just pencil (just black and white) because I often feel ...