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Hey! I really enjoyed reading this. I'm not entirely sure why, and it's great that I'm so helpful, but there was something about your writing that was compelling. An awesome ...

This is another/second part to my earlier post. I think this one is more exciting and fun, so this is going to be my entry for lucyy's 'Step into your ...

To winie603: thanks! yeah, on it's own it's not a specifically interesting story, but I also didn't want to make it too long. So thanks for the advice - I'm ...

Well, this was my first idea for lucyy's marvelous competition. I'm sure most of you know the Harry Potter books... so I don't really need to give much additional information! ...

Yeah points would be nice... is there a catch? do you (and I know you probably don't cos you're so wordly wise and clever) need anything in return? haha

I nominate beckiw, Meadowlark and Velvet.whispers for being super-nice and wonderful people. beckiw especially because she introduced me to YWS and I cannot thank her enough for doing so!! I ...

Sorry that this part isn't particularly exciting... the next part will be, but I didn't want to make it too long. Thanks for all the help so far! The new ...

Bex! MY WORD those pictures (and the first set) are pretty darn awesome!! You are so good at photography (duh - you already know that, I just wanted to reiterate ...

Hey! I really loved this. It was short (always a good thing for a first part - there is nothing more offputting than a never-ending piece of writing!) but extremely ...

Hey Lethero! I really enjoyed reading this, and not just because it was a nice readable length! Thanks for not making it too long :D lol. There are just a ...

Heya! This is nice! And not the "nice" which is bland and boring, the "nice" where you say "niiiiiiicce!!" and draw it out, like "aaaahohaawweeesome"!! I loved it! The atmosphere ...

We've been looking at bio-technology at school, and that inspired me to think up this. North-West England, 2076 Even the usually poker-faced and calm newsreader looked terrified. I watched the ...

Hi! This is the first piece of science fiction I've reciewed on YWS, so sorry if I'm a little... vague in this lol. First of all, I think your writing ...

Hi! I agree with what has already been said (sorry to repeat) but you want to make it longer/elaborate. Apart from that, it seems really intriguing (and anyway, I love ...

Hi! I really enjoyed reading this. I think the idea is really fantastic - and even though the idea of people with wings is not entirely original on its own, ...