Cotton

hi there :D it says Part 6, but I'm coming to this with no prior knowledge and yet I felt like this could have been the first part. You made ...

hello :D grammar and punctuation nut, at your service! I haven't read the first chapter, but your writing made me feel like I hadn't missed anything... not in a the-first-part-must-have-been-really-du

hey :D I haven't read the earlier parts, because I'm just zipping around and pointing out grammatical and punctuation mistakes, but I got the story. You told me exactly what ...

hello :D I am grammar and punctuation freak, here to irritate - nice to meet you! Generally, you have a nice variation of sentence structure and go beyond just "bla ...

hello :D I have to confess, I'm here to point out grammar and punctuation stuff so I won't be very helpful on plot matters and such. Generally, you used a ...

hello :D I haven't read the other parts, I confess, but I'm all fired up with correcting grammar and punctuation so I'll just go through and see if I can ...

Hi :D I reviewed your first chapter, and thought I'd check in to see how it's going. As a mainly grammar and punctuation corrector, I won't comment on the content, ...

Hello :D This is hauntingly moving and awfully relateable. Literally awful, because I bet there's a million girls who know exactly this feeling, or close enough. Your descriptions are accurate ...

hi :) so the story is interesting, and reasonably well executed. You definitely knew at the beginning what exactly was going to happen and when, and that came off - ...

Well you certainly took me by surprise. With that opening, I'd been expecting some love-sick puppy who would spend the next however many words pining. Oh, no. This is hilarious! ...

hellooo :D I'm better at picking on minute matters of grammar and sentence structure, so my comments on your story in general will probably be somewhat limited :P I thought ...

bonjour :D This is ace. Pure and simple. I could list all the best bits, and I think I will: from the very, very beginning, your narrator's voice is clear, ...

helloo! A lovely bite-sized snippet of an opener (I like short things - I think we're going to get on swimmingly :P) with some really intriguing descriptions and ideas being ...

hi... I reviewed this piece the other day. Or I should say, the other copy of this piece you have on the website. Did you do that intentionally, because you ...

hi there. I have to agree with the above reviewer's opinion on your grammar, punctuation etc. Just to ask - is English your first language? If it's not, then I ...