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Hey! I am here to eat some cake... no, wait, I'm here to review your lovely story! It's so sweet - and yet not sweet. I think it's hilarious!! Awesome ...

They learned quickly why everybody down there was so very thin. For starters, there was virtually no food. Caty had had this thought amongst a manic mess of others when ...

Heya! Well I haven't read chapters one and two, so I can give you an unbiased review - because I have absolutely no idea what's going to happen next. And ...

Another couple of heads peered nervously – and yet still betraying an air of excitement – around the open doorway. Caty tried to process what she had just been told ...

Aaah such a fun topic thread! Anyway, I do like: > in the most recent adaptation of Pride and Prejudice (ft. Kiera Knightly) the guy who plays Darcy. Yes it ...

Heya! I'm a bit like you, I always wanted to read above my age group! Anyways, I would recommend these books: > The Louise Rennison books - they're absolutely hilarious ...

Well, this is about the two books (so far) in this series (I suppose) by Gemma Malley, and a small section of the second one, The Resistance, that confuses and ...

Heya! I thought this was really cute and had some great ideas, but it wasn't very attention-grabbing as an opening. Consider, perhaps, elongating it a little and leaving it on ...

Even as one of the biggest twilight fans there ever lived (in England, because the American fans go waaaay beyond what I'm capable of with my limited time-scale) I thought ...

Hiya! I really love your style of writing, it's really easy to read and follow so thumbs-up on that! Your characters are pretty cool as well, and I liked the ...

This story is based on a dream a friend of mine had. I thought it was marvellous and she agreed I could write the story. Enjoy, and laugh - it's ...

Hey! After reading this, I'm not entirely sure if Fantasy Fiction is the best place for it, as it does not really seem to fit into this genre. However, if ...

Hey! On a first note, this wasn't too long at all! It was just right. Perfect. Which, incidentally, is a very good word to use to describe your piece. Perfect. ...

Hey! This was really interesting, mostly because your main character is a little girl. Most things I've read on here (and from my own experience) are written about teens or ...

Hey! I thought these two little chapters were really cute - and not too long, which is also very nice! There is nothing more off-putting than an endless post! Right, ...