Cotton

Hiya! I've had this bookmarked for a little while, and I've finally been able to come and review! Hoorah for me. OK, I feel like nitpicking, since there's not much ...

Hey! Yay I get to be the first reviewer. *EDIT one minute out! Darn!* Anyway, this was really good - an urban fantasy story that's original... wait, that's already been ...

Hey! I've had this bookmarked for a while and I've finally had enough time to read it properly. And actually, after reading the first little section a few days ago ...

Hey! I agree with what's been said previously, in that I thought this was interesting but it wasn't clear where it was going. Some of the stuff with the fire ...

Hey! You've been here for over a month now I notice, so I hope you've settled in and are enjoying yourself. Anyway, to your piece. It's not normally the sort ...

Hey! You haven't been hit by a nitpicker yet I see, so voila! Here I am, to nitpick. I want to start of by complimenting your work, which I can. ...

Hey! I noticed this hasn't been reviewed even though it's been up for a while. I hope I can be of some help to you! OK, first of all, I ...

This was tantalising!! An excellent follow-on piece, and very professionally written. It took an interesting turn with the drastic change of setting and you did this smoothly and neatly. So ...

Hiya! I just reviewed the first part and so I am here, as promised, to help you with the second. Absolutely you should continue with this!! It has the makings ...

Ooooh! Wow! I'm hooked! I saw your part two and thought to myself, "Interesting. I should look at part one first though, so I know what's going on!" And I'm ...

Hey! I noticed your comment about your problems with caps, so I appreciate that and I won't bother to point them out - I'm sure you know they're there! OK, ...

Hi! I saw this a couple of days ago when it had one review and I liked the look of it, so I bookmarked it and now I've got around ...

Agreed with Rosey: I get the same thing. Other than that, everything is going really well for me: the chat is particularly great, it looks funky and the games are ...

Hey! I agree with the opening above comment, in that the storyline is unclear and the characters are a mystery. But I liked this about your extract - as well ...

A bit late, but I've read these books and, even though I found book 2 and especially book 3 hard to read because of the hard subject matter (whoa me ...