Cookiegirl16

hey rebecca, i do like this, even thought u have made a few errors... and the ending is a bit odd... wouldn't 'he looked up at the sky and... died' ...

oh, i do like this one! you did make a few slilght errors, but then who doesn't? i do like it, it sounds like the kind of book i would ...

wow, this is a pretty cool story! it's really very descriptive and interesting, i quite like the way you can decribe how vampires actually think and feel, it seems almost ...