Cookiegirl16

okay, here's Chapter 4! Chapter 4 Later that night, I lay awake in the bed clutching the duvet cover tightly in my hands. I was in my black silk nightie ...

okay, here it is: Chapter 3 After I’d posted the letter I ran back to my hotel room as fast as I could – luckily I never fell on the ...

okay, thanks for pointing that out, i've fixed that problem. i'll post chapter 3 soon, thank you for your comments :-)

okay, well, here's the next bit: Chapter 2 “Hey, Courtney – I’m back! Are you in here?” Nicholas called out cheerfully, as the door to our hotel room banged open. ...

hey rebecca, i do like this, even thought u have made a few errors... and the ending is a bit odd... wouldn't 'he looked up at the sky and... died' ...

oh, i do like this one! you did make a few slilght errors, but then who doesn't? i do like it, it sounds like the kind of book i would ...

okay, thanks for the advice - i sorted out that one little mistake and spaced out the paragraphs, so it's easier to read. and i also trimmed the captions a ...

awww, thanks, i'm glad you liked it. i have already completed it; it has 46 chapters altogether which i'll of course post on here. i'll let you know once i ...

Okay, this is my first proper romantic story, I'd really like some opinions on it. Be honest :-) Chapter 1 Dear Aunt Clara, Three months ago I broke up with ...

whoa... this looks pretty cool! i loved the mystery in the first chapter, and you write great cliffhanger endings well done, i like it :-)

wow, this is a pretty cool story! it's really very descriptive and interesting, i quite like the way you can decribe how vampires actually think and feel, it seems almost ...

wow... thanks, i never thought i'd get so many replies so fast you can all call me Cookie on here if you like, and the thing I like to write ...

um, hi everyone... i'm a new member on here, and i really would like to make some friends :-) and tell me about this site, cos i don't know it ...