Cobweb

CHAPTER I Serge woke to a persistent nudging and a low nasal voice calling his name. He rolled over and moaned an incoherent protest. It wasn’t early for already the ...

I don’t critique for grammatical error and such–unless they are screaming at me–so I’ll just go for the story and writing. Writing: Your writing is fine. Good. Maybe a little ...

:D Yes, this picture is one of my favorites, because I love the story behind it. Seyonne is a character from Carol Berg’s novel Transformation , the first in a ...

Ooh, nice stuff. You have real skill. Ever thought of graphic novels? Is that what you’re writing? You’ve really got it on Maria. I love how the clothes hang so ...

I had the entire picture here, wasn't sure if that was a good idea. If you think it was, let me know. For now, a link. Let me hear from ...

Exactly so on the mess ups. It’s over-the-top kind of humor.:) What kind of music do you play?

Well, I don’t particularly like vampire stories–they are so worn. You are a good writer though, as good as many I’ve read, so this story just needs a really original ...

I believe Bickazer has covered most everything already (good critique, Bickazer) I too noticed the ‘Eragon feel’. Not that that’s so bad–after all, it worked for what’s-his-name–but you wa

Thank you all for the welcome. You’re very nice (unless you were just doing it to rack up those points :D ). And especially to those who offered to critique. ...

Excellent suggestions on all counts. Yes, you found me out; I’m French-illiterate. As for the length I didn’t stop to think of that. This is my first attempt at play ...

This is a comedy, as you’ve read, and it is a very inane one, too. I can’t help it if you don’t like it but you may post your critique ...

Hello all. I am Cobweb. I’m alternately a writer and a professional bum, depending on my optimism level. I love writing and, even more, reading. I guess you could describe ...