Cobweb

Please review, dear listening public. Vs 1 Well it’s been three days and a hundred lonely nights Sometimes I wonder what happened to my life Now it’s been twelve days ...

Lovely symmetry. I think you would be very good a murals. How big can/do you do? Have you done many drawings like this? I love your designs but I don’t ...

CHAPTER I: Part Two “Who met with Signore Havlat before me?” “Oh, I... Signore Latten? Yes, I think it was Latten.” The secretary sniffed and took a deep breath. Serge ...

CHAPTER II It was an unsteady, washed dawn when Leland heard the car. The faint sound of an engine taking the early morning highway at a neat seventy-five. Leland had ...

Okay, did a little editing. Let me know if the hard to understand parts are any better. Once again, thank you all so very much. I’m really getting some constructive ...

Thank you. Your opinion does count. If you’re listening to the music, it’s on par with anyone else's. I’m very glad you like it. It’s one of my favorite songs ...

Thank you both for taking the time to read and review! It was helpful. I’m not an editor, I just throw writing out as fast as I can type. :P ...

I like this poem. It speaks to you with real emotion. It paints a picture. ...I hid beneath a heather bush, amongst the purple flowers... ...I buried my gun, my ...

CHAPTER I The storm pounded on the car roof, creating a steel mesh in the head lights, washing the highway in oily black. As if by design, both the storm ...

Really, you can put anything to a tune. Consistent rhythm, from verse to verse, is necessary to keep the same tune but music is such an open art. I too ...

:P Thank You! Seyonne is holding a demon mirror.

This is in the completely wrong section, love. It needs to be in forum 14 ( ) Love Kris Thanks, love.:smt090 Many apologies, to the Mods.

Well, I congratulate you on your (more) original introduction-tread title. I can’t give any advice on the board, don’t spend too much time here myself. Keeping up on politics is ...

Good stuff first. The progressive rhythm is interesting and the rhyming is random in a unique way. Not so good stuff. ...try to reach for the skies. you try to ...

Ask why So sick of burnt fingers and knots in the string The one time it made sense it was only a dream Rock can’t bleed but it can break ...