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I like the title, actually: it's what got me attracted to read it! :D I like the detail in the girl's thoughts, because you already get to know her well. ...

Chapter 6. He felt warm… There was a clean, white room and bright lights shining at him when he opened his heavy eyes. His limbs felt as though they weighed ...

I took this from my phone, and it's purposely red bcause I put it in front of my red curtains to reflect the colour on it.

I love the shading! I also love the crispness of the deer and the way you've used colour in your first picture! Oil pastels are very cool, and the ground's ...

You did that in pen? Wow! That takes skill. I like the detail a lot and I like how it's got a plain background behind itso as not to distract ...

I hope you like it guys and gals, because I really tried. It is a drawing fom my head, with no copying involved from anywhere. I will post some more ...

Chapter 5. ‘Hello?’ Danielle answered the phone. ‘Hey, it’s me. You’ve forgotten your CD at mine,’ Sabrina said, chirpily. She was walking with Leo and Tony: Gregory had decided to ...

Hey, this is great! Accurate and dramatic but in an understated way: the only reason why it is dramatic is the situation itself! But the way you have written it ...

My check might, though. Cheque, not check. Um that and you mean "grimacing?" Anyway, I like the story so far and would love to hear more, because I'm questioning it ...

I liked the idea and the story, and the errors n' whatnothave been pointed out. Hmmm, I think that it could have been written better, like less confusing and more ...

This is kool. I can relate, and to be honest, the feelings are pretty much accurate. I like it; more please!

My mouth dropped, because wow. ...Amazing.

Chapter 4. The gang walked in the middle of Sabrina’s road, which was very near to the park. There were no cars, as it wasn’t busy. The sun almost completely ...

Chapter 3. Everyone was having a great time: Danielle, Sabrina, Tony and Sebastien were going down the huge ramps, Andrew and Greg were bum-boarding, and Leo was practising on the ...

This is different, and that's really cool. I can sort of relate to this, so yeah! Wickid ones. I'm gonna read the second chapter now, if there is one, but ...