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Oh my lardy!!! That is so awesome, it looks so dynamic!! >.< Nick is the best Jonas brother to draw. xx

Hahahahahahahaahaha I loved this!! This is so jokes, I loved the end bit, gosh I love Miserella, she's such a fiesty bitch! >.< Wickid! Oh my lardy if you did ...

That was awesome. My heart's still racing lolz! The mistakes n shiz have been pointed out, but wow it leaves me with a lot of questions, which is pretty sick ...

Hi! Wow this looks great, the proportions are good and I like how you captured the peacefulness of the subject. Her nose and lips are very good. To improve, maybe ...

Well, I would be pissed off too, if that happened to me! Anyway, it was a fantastic chapter! Wonderful! Marvellous! I've been waiting for two days for this CHA MUN ...

My eyes are wet and I nearly cried! Poor Liz! And that bloody bastard MUN. Shame!! But it's so sad because I really liked Alex's character but then he did ...

To be honest, it wasn't confusing at all. I liked it: it seems truthful, fun and deeper than most romantic fiction posted here. I'd like to read more (if you ...

Nah nah, I woke up at about 9am today, and I thought, 'Let's go to YWS and see if Playing The Field has a new chapter posted'. So I checked, ...

What?!?!!? That bastard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He better have been forced for that shit, otherwise he's an honourary asshole!!!!!!!!!! :O:O:O I'm so glad I came to this post this morning! Thanks for shocking ...

With a little editing, this will be a masterpiece. And you know what? I admit, I'm growing fond of the story and the reactions and the gestures that I once ...

Cheers for the advice mayyyn! >.

Hi, I like this story, just look over it and edit spelling n' grammer n' whatnot. To be honset, I agree with KJ about the dialogue and reactions, though don't ...

That was pretty good, I thought it were two people watching a movie with these two characters, but it turned out these WERE the two people! In a good way ...

Whoa. That is deep and powerful! I liked the descriptions...the emotive descriptions! I also liked the amount of the boy's emotion you had included in the extract, also how fast-paced ...

Hey, most of the errors have been pointed out, so I will not go over them when you've seen them already. Sounds logical, doesn't it? :P Okay, well I really ...