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Whenever someone annoys me, a simple “go away” paired with my signature icy glare, would be sufficient to send him or her scampering off. -cut the comma after 'glare' because ...

Thanks guys

I stood by the bus stop with my arms crossed, resisting the feeling to say 'Go fuck yourself!' to the blistering cold winds of December. But I didn't, and I ...

Wow, I nearly cried reading that. And my hearteat hasn't rested actually, damn! Urgh and now you've made me think twice about how I make my way home. Give that ...

It's pretty good, pretty good. It's cool to see a boy's point of view, and it does seem very English, as I am too :) Conversations are natural and are ...

Very descriptive, moving and comes from somewhere honest, I can tell. Most things that are an almost-direct transcript of our past experiences write more emtionally, and it definetely shows. I ...

This is most excellent! It's original with the refreshing attitudes of the characters- they're not the likeable types, which makes you like them because the main character has a certain ...

That is deep and amazing. I felt the misery of the character, and I don't really see any errors. I could imagine the distance between the characters, and unfortunately these ...

I know what you mean! >.< My art teacher gave me an art book with 20th century atwork n shit, bloomin' hell I found the work rubbish! I love Italian-type ...

I feel for you, I really do. I can't really say anymore about this, except that I'm really glad that you have released your secret.

I really loved this. I thought it was going to be some break up story but it's soooo much better than what I had expected! The grammer, puntuation, errors etc. ...

That was amazing. I loved the flashback and you got the innocence of Becca as a ten-year old. Just look over it and change stuff like "painted" to "painting" when ...

Awww safe for implying you're going to put me berthday down! >.

I like the colours very much! Multi-coloured shiz is where it's at! >.

Wow, what a great end. I like how that tied it up, Bradley now becoming a real centre piece of the epilogue. The ending conversation was good too, as it ...