Clup91

If a 12 year old wrote like that, then DAMN that 12 year old knows their stuff!

No such thing as goodbye to writing!

That was a very entertaining chapter indeed, and I was definetely one of those who found the period talk rather perculiar! It's fabulous how you've used that as a way ...

I like this beginning. It is the exception of data-dumping and actually fits into how this story is going to go. I'm really interested in how it's going to continue, ...

I loved this chapter, and I'm guessing Helen's the iloveH3? Characters: fantastic. The storyline is really starting to rev up now, which is cool, though I hope there's going to ...

Brilliant! The characters are now taking shape, which is very good indeed. Make the argument more...tense, though. One would rarely use the word "please" when defending their best friend.

It's not the names that confuse me, I think you should look over it for sure before you post, mmm'kay? x

I knowww how you feel!! Today especially, I've been feeling lost, or like I want to escape for a bit because I feel like a lot of the stuff i ...

LOL bring back the real CN days man! Flintstones, Dexter's Lab, Cow and Chicken, Looney Tunes, I Am Weasel, Ed Edd and Eddy... :P Nah man it's a cool tune! ...

YESSS!! The title got me in and it was sick!! Every teenager can relate to this and will love it! >.< It's all true... **wipes away tear** ...it's so beautiful!

I really like this song, and the subject is original and something that grabbed my attention. Nice touch with the skateboarding! ;)

Hi, in ways you are definetely right and got me to think. Yeah, a lot of the time people see me as being good or a good person, but half ...

I definetely loved the last line (as usual)! Ummm it wa way too confusing becaue of the POV and you mixed up people's names and that really confused me and ...

I like this chapter! Um...make Nate sound more morose if that's the kind of air you want about him. Make Nathaniel's tone of voice more casual and less formality for ...

I liked it. Um is Melody supposed to sound like a total nerd with that whole "Mister" and formality thing going on? And please stop putting them disclaimers up before ...