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Hey Insomnia! After all we’d been though together Small typo. "Through". It sounded [s]and[/s] distorted Typo. “Sam?” I said . “Is that you? It’s been so long. We haven’t talked ...

I is here, KJ! The chapters are getting very short. Of course, that equals easy reading and reviewing on YWS so.... yay. :D In your actual word document though, I ...

My boyfriend made me watch the movie of this book, and I was really disappointed with it. Now I'm a little wary of the book - it's not the gore, ...

'Ello, 'ello, 'ello. One: As a new member, you should check into the rules. One of the rules is that you need to post two reviews before posting a work ...

Hey Moriah! I'm returning the review, since I appreciate it! ^_^ No merchant ship had ever fought back against Captain LaVie I love the name! Anthony LaVie never missed an ...

Yay, stuff by you. ^_^ Her hand is unsteady, the train [s]is[/s] jumping and shifting, and the heart drips and dribbles into an imperfect shape that Misa rubs out with ...

Heeey! Or [s]for[/s] a human for that matter? Don't need it. NOT for a human It's best to avoid using caps in stories. This would look much better italicized. You ...

Hey Ka Seven! Welcome to YWS. First off : the first paragraph is much too long. At the very beginning of a story, such a text wall is deterring to ...

Hey, KJ. Yay, more to this story! They seemed like cold, distant strangers rather than the friends and allies they’d been I the past. I don't know if there's anything ...

Reviewing time! *puts on cape and gets sceptre* >D Mr. Prescott shouts, glaring at his black and white TV with the black and white horses running and the black and ...

Hey Buttefly! Duncan had fought with me about dad's case, he didn't think that dad was innocent like I did You need a connector besides the comma, like "and" or ...

Hey Prof! The comma and question mark things have been pointed out, so I'm going to ignore those as I read through this. "I am a doctor. Let me see ...

Oh, I see what you're doing here you sneaky bugger. And I love it! Wonderful idea. I wish I could give this two stars, but site set-up and all that. ...

Heya! Welcome to YWS! Very important: You need to go out on the site and review some things, since you have 0 reviews of now. Read the site rules for ...

Hey Kaaila! I was too young to go off on my own like that, my mom would probably have had a heart attack if she had known what I was ...