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Oooh, I like you, with your rule reading and your PMing of mods. Excited for when you post your work. Also, now I'm curious as to what "ripped" story you're ...

Hey Ella! I am your friendly, neighborhood reviewer~ One thing I notice right off the bat: You have a few paragraphs that are way too long . It's okay to ...

SAM! How did this slip past me? I didn't notice it was posted until I saw it in my newsfeed one of the times YWS logged me out. You need ...

Oh man, I sooo learned this back in high school in AP Bio... let's see if I can remember... Gah! I can't. I had to look it up. The hemoglobin ...

I don't know if this thread can thrive, because people may not have heard the song above them. Either way... 6/10 I think Muse has much better songs.

Welcome to YWS, Hikari! I hope you enjoy it here! Site Rules : I would suggest checking out the rules for some juicy necessary tidbits. One of these is that ...

Aw, very very cute! I do like this, he has an adorable expression. Helping tips, though: The fur is drawn nice, but the texture is somewhat spacey - I see ...

No? Haha. The person below me likes reggae.

7/10... Radiohead saved you some points. 1. Get Up Get Out - the Rosebuds 2. Whatever Gets You Through Today - the Radios 3. We Both Go Down Together - ...

Hahaha! Australia looks like a drowned rat! And we need to get people in Africa writing.

Hi Cammie, I like your idea of many short stories making one big story. Sounds like House on Mango Street. Nitpicking First a brown-haired woman who appeared to be at ...

I love tiramisu! Let's go get some tiramisu! I'm the year of the snake. All it means is stubborn though, that I remember... phooey...

You sound like me. Exceptionally short and pale. What type of doctor is your dad?

Welcome to YWS, Chilly Willy! You should have had two reviews before posting your own work, but I'm sure you'll get reviewing soon. :) Wow, this is exceptionally short. Perhaps ...

I read this book when I was 11 and I bawled my eyes out. I found it slightly disturbing. Perhaps I was just a sensitive kid though. The part about ...