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  • Media Reviews Re: Ranger's Apprentice

    I had to read the first one for the young adult book club I coached, and I didn't very much like it. I found it dull. But that could possibly ...

    Aug 18, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: Seems like a logical place to go...

    You're 15 and 6'3"?! Oh my. :shock: I'm nineteen and, um, five feet! On the dot! How intimidating. I'm a huge FMA nut. Other than that, I don't really watch/read ...

    Aug 18, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: For Blue Skies

    Heya, Mixtape. I will be your friendly reviewer... Blue skies melted me up like butter shaping my day into a fluffy cloud. Comma: "Blue skies melted me like butter, shaping ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Welcome Mat Re: New to Young Writers Society!

    Welcome! It's best to read the rules before posting. Two-to-one reviews to post ratio... yep, that's how it goes here. What do you like to write? We have pretty much ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Vyper: Soulless

    Hey Arek! I will be your little friendly reviewer... Capitalization is Key You must, MUST, capitalize at the start of every sentence. It's part of those things that make a ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Art & Photography Re: Sunset

    Wow. Those are way too big to get a decent look at. You should definitely shrink those puppies down using paint and the "resize" tool. That's what I typically do ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Drowning in a Pool of Kisses

    Hey lhighton! Title : Euggh, ohhh, man. I hate it. Sorry. It just sounds much too Harlequin Romance-y, and I'm sure that's not what you're going for. Plus, the imagery ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Other Re: A Night Haunting

    Welcome to YWS, Soul! I am the friendly neighbor Clo. 8) First of all: That picture is horrifying, haha. She thrashed about wildly, covers ensnaring he like vines on a ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Media Reviews Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read

    I'm sorry for saying no HP, Twilight and Eragon, but haven't you people already gotten it out of your system? It's universal knowledge that many readers greatly dislike those books. ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Media Reviews Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read

    I read many brilliant books - and then there's a few that are so mind-numbingly awful that I feel like I wasted my mental energy reading them. For now, I'm ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Media Reviews Re: What's the weirdest book you've ever read?

    Icaruss>> Wow. That doesn't really seem like a... book. Wouldn't that be more passible as poetry? I tried reading Irvine Welsh once and had to give up due to just... ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Writers Corner Re: how many drafts do you go through??

    I usually look over my story twice before putting it up on this site. Then again, I'm pretty good at catching little errors and grammar mistakes. I guess it depends ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Writing Tips Re: Odd way of writing

    I always write the end before I begin. If it worked for J.K Rowling, it works for me Ah, for reals? I didn't know. Writing the ending before writing everything ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Media Reviews Re: What's the weirdest book you've ever read?

    Most definitely the Painted Bird by Jerzy Kosinski. It's not even autobiographical, so I don't know what he was thinking. Disturbed writings from a disturbed mind.

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Question about the final fantasy series

    Like Sureal said, most of the Final Fantasies aren't connected. But the series contain a lot of variety, since they span almost two decades and each have their own storyline, ...

    Aug 17, 2008


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