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Ms. Antigone Cadmus Haruno Sakura... I am here to review. :) --- Her footsteps pit pat throughout the walls, bouncing off the stalactites and into her pounding eardrum. "Throughout" seems ...

Hola GreatEscape! --- I did not have to look at my husband beside me to know that he was staring also. Also looks odd at the end of the sentence ...

Hey SCD! Welcome to YWS! We have a very active Storybooks forum here, which is basically RPing. I think someone's already given you a link, so go enjoy that! There's ...

Oh wow, this is extremely impressive for an Oekaki. I'm terrible using that, and I'm always so impressed by anyone who can do things like this with it. Though it's ...

Peanutpeanutpeanut, lucky you were in chat so I could spot this need of a story review! ^_^ --- I stood still as a statue. My nose pressed against the cold, ...

Hey Elijah! How do you do? --- What's going on in this story seems very interesting. The style it is written in, however, is extremely choppy and this is extremely ...

This is so interesting -- now I see areas where I focus a lot, and areas I could spend more time in. Sweet!

Conrad, the devilish speed writer. Well, hey, at least you have one killer beefy profile of short stories. --- Hell is noise. It is a cacaphony of vicious sounds, the ...

I am so jealous of everyone else's vacations! :O

The YWS Blog is back!

Once I see this movie (which you make me want to do, as I've already established), then I will flood this forum with my opinion! Seriously though, I am planning ...

A true hero.

And you're just a year old! *so proud*

And you're just a year old! *so proud*

Hey Juicebox! --- The year, 2113, the earth finally built its first station beyond the moon. The structuring of this sentence is rather odd. You have two commas in there, ...