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Clo

  • Media Reviews Re: The Alchemist

    Start crying? I wouldn't say the book is even nearly that close to be moving in that sort of way - not to say it isn't a good book. It ...

    Oct 21, 2008
  • Romantic Novels Re: Every Angel Has To Fall Chapter 1 Pt 3

    OLIIIVIA. You mangly old coot, you. He managed to salvage the sim card mind you. He just didn’t have a phone to put it in I'm pretty sure it's SIM ...

    Oct 21, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Technology

    I don't think people will truly ever give up the lovely field of holding a book in their hands.

    Oct 21, 2008
  • Scripts Re: Halloween with Snoink, Grif, Edward Cullen, and Bulbasaur

    There was a significant lack of Bulbasaur that I find appalling. I demand more Bulbasaur. MOAR!

    Oct 19, 2008
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Cliche Fantasy

    Terry Goodkind's fantasy series is horrifically cliche. "Hey Richard... You're a truth sayer! Here's your sword! Go stop this dark evil lord in this other land! GO NOW!" Actually, I ...

    Oct 19, 2008
  • Media Reviews Re: Of Mice and Men

    I think Of Mice and Men is good. Easy to analyze, short, sad, full of good things... I didn't find it boring either. People seem to just have an aversion ...

    Oct 19, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Two Entries for Cal's Contest

    Hey Conrad! I'm glad you contacted me - I love reading/reviewing your work. Maverick The characterization in the first story is fun. Gillie is very endearing, and her connection with ...

    Oct 19, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Death Threat to Prufrock

    Thanks! *hugs for you!* I really need some revision tips, and no one at Will Review for Food is biting. Can I has edits? :)

    Oct 19, 2008
  • Novel Workshop Re: The Love Note ch. 1&2

    Hey Jamie! Review Part One ( I need to be off soon, so I'll review half your story now, and the other half later. Promise !) I'm going to edit ...

    Oct 19, 2008
  • WRFF Archive Re: Reviews - now half price!

    again, again! a different one

    Oct 19, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Death Threat to Prufrock

    I plan on seriously revising this several times, and I need your help. Writing powers, activate! Prufrock, the universe does not move with you. Perhaps occasionally you move me, and ...

    Oct 18, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: We Used to Dream Vacation

    Thank you very much for the comments, everyone! I am taking all of them into consideration and making changes. This is very helpful! ~ Clo

    Oct 16, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Scavenger - 1.1

    Here is I to saaave the daaaay! :lol: Wow, you've got a nice long story here. Let me get on this review! The wind lifted a corner of the poster ...

    Oct 16, 2008
  • Information Desk Archive Re: New YWS Feedback

    I am so excited for this! I demand... uh... an awesome new site. I should have thought on what to write before I clicked "reply". :?

    Oct 16, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Rooftop

    Hey Cold - I'm sorry I took so long to get to reviewing this! Classes and work, you know? Life gets in the way of the good stuff. ;p It ...

    Oct 16, 2008


Deal with the faults of others as gently as with your own.
— Chinese proverb