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  • Lyric Poetry Re: I Stand Up

    Ayumi-- I enjoy this poem, mainly because I think the final line is so simple and sweet. I have only one qualm I would like to point out though: I ...

    Sep 3, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Armageddon

    Hey lkay06! I will be your reviewer today. :) --- [BEFORE THIS SEGMENT: I'm a little confused as to what you mean by "this segment". Can you perhaps clarify? It's ...

    Sep 1, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Angler Part I

    Hey Ryanx! You may be wondering, "Why has no one reviewed this?!" The answer is simple: on this site, we have a rule that you must review at least two ...

    Sep 1, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The Manio Family

    Hey Leoni! This is quite long, but I feel ready to tackle it. ;) --- NITPICKS The black fug of a night in Soorey Island Typo here. his fingers tracing ...

    Sep 1, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Modern Buddha

    Marriage? Never! Just an obligation to keep me from freedom. I'm quite happy to not see another human for months on end. You'd be surprised how much your mindset can ...

    Sep 1, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: What kind of title draws you in?

    Hm, that's a good question. I guess really it comes down to whether it sounds interesting me in particular or not based on my personal interests. If somebody loves dragons, ...

    Sep 1, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Review Stuff With 0 Comments!

    Holy stats!

    Sep 1, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Review Stuff With 0 Comments!

    I love the ratio feature! :D

    Sep 1, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: a cool dog guy

    Is this an oekaki, or what program did you use? I really can't any nitpicks with it. It's a really wonderful character sketch, and the coloring, shading, proportions -- they're ...

    Aug 31, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Your Writing Insecurities

    I tend to nitpick about every sentence until I end up overthinking and picking odd words or something. :?

    Aug 31, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Help me I'm Drowning!

    I'll be your friend! Hello Empress! I am Clo, and I'm happy to see you perusing the forums! If you ever need any help, send me an AIM, and I'm ...

    Aug 30, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: What musical album has affected your writing most?

    Good topic! Definitely Neutral Milk Hotel's "In the Aeroplane Over the Sea" *struck with overdone album arrow*. And any album by of Montreal.

    Aug 30, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: An Iron Sea pt. 2

    Sir Conrad! The unfortunate hypothermia gal, her name is Denise Patterson? And Claireborne's assistant's name is Hallie Natterson? Haha. Sorry, I'm focusing a bit too much on names, but did ...

    Aug 1, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: An Iron Sea pt. 1

    My good sir! I am quite late with this, but me and internet haven't really been all that adhesive to each other lately, and you know this. Since you've already ...

    Aug 1, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Featured Member of July: lilymoore

    Wrong European city, Lily dear! But it's okay -- you're still amazing and featured!

    Jul 15, 2009


Once you have read a book you care about, some part of it is always with you.
— Louis L'Amour