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Re: I Stand Up
Ayumi-- I enjoy this poem, mainly because I think the final line is so simple and sweet. I have only one qualm I would like to point out though: I ...
Sep 3, 2009 -
Re: Armageddon
Hey lkay06! I will be your reviewer today. :) --- [BEFORE THIS SEGMENT: I'm a little confused as to what you mean by "this segment". Can you perhaps clarify? It's ...
Sep 1, 2009 -
Re: Angler Part I
Hey Ryanx! You may be wondering, "Why has no one reviewed this?!" The answer is simple: on this site, we have a rule that you must review at least two ...
Sep 1, 2009 -
Re: The Manio Family
Hey Leoni! This is quite long, but I feel ready to tackle it. ;) --- NITPICKS The black fug of a night in Soorey Island Typo here. his fingers tracing ...
Sep 1, 2009 -
Re: Modern Buddha
Marriage? Never! Just an obligation to keep me from freedom. I'm quite happy to not see another human for months on end. You'd be surprised how much your mindset can ...
Sep 1, 2009 -
Re: What kind of title draws you in?
Hm, that's a good question. I guess really it comes down to whether it sounds interesting me in particular or not based on my personal interests. If somebody loves dragons, ...
Sep 1, 2009 -
Re: Review Stuff With 0 Comments!
Holy stats!
Sep 1, 2009 -
Re: Review Stuff With 0 Comments!
I love the ratio feature! :D
Sep 1, 2009 -
Re: a cool dog guy
Is this an oekaki, or what program did you use? I really can't any nitpicks with it. It's a really wonderful character sketch, and the coloring, shading, proportions -- they're ...
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: Your Writing Insecurities
I tend to nitpick about every sentence until I end up overthinking and picking odd words or something. :?
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: Help me I'm Drowning!
I'll be your friend! Hello Empress! I am Clo, and I'm happy to see you perusing the forums! If you ever need any help, send me an AIM, and I'm ...
Aug 30, 2009 -
Re: What musical album has affected your writing most?
Good topic! Definitely Neutral Milk Hotel's "In the Aeroplane Over the Sea" *struck with overdone album arrow*. And any album by of Montreal.
Aug 30, 2009 -
Re: An Iron Sea pt. 2
Sir Conrad! The unfortunate hypothermia gal, her name is Denise Patterson? And Claireborne's assistant's name is Hallie Natterson? Haha. Sorry, I'm focusing a bit too much on names, but did ...
Aug 1, 2009 -
Re: An Iron Sea pt. 1
My good sir! I am quite late with this, but me and internet haven't really been all that adhesive to each other lately, and you know this. Since you've already ...
Aug 1, 2009 -
Re: Featured Member of July: lilymoore
Wrong European city, Lily dear! But it's okay -- you're still amazing and featured!
Jul 15, 2009
