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The Birth of Venus is about a young girl growing up during the beginning of the Renaissance in Florence. A lot of art, a lot of religious tumult - it ...

Hey Hannah! Welcome to this grand metropolis of writing. This place isn't intimidating at all. :P we're just a bunch of weirdos. True story. This is an amazing community for ...

Hey BumbleBear! Your username is so cute sounding. You're going to love it here at YWS. It's such an amazing community for young writers - there's a lot of support ...

As requested, more information: Yeah, I figured after I reviewed most of my confusion was because these really aren't stand-alone pieces and I needed to know more background information before ...

As much as I'm sick of Twilight topics, I want to ask this reviewer to come over and make sandwiches with me and then maybe we could watch some television ...

Hey Maki! *flies in on rope* Here I am to saaave the daaay! She stood there, frozen- Her long twig legs shaking. You don't follow a dash with another capitalized ...

Hm. I've read a lot, but now I find it hard in remembering the titles... I really enjoyed the Birth of Venus by Sarah Dunant, but that's not YA. How ...

This is a very old topic. o_O

Hey Dragon! Welcome to YWS! *hugs* First off, I have a small suggestion. Try not to use polls in your stories - if someone likes or dislikes it, they will ...

Hey Dragon! Welcome to YWS! *hugs* First off, I have a small suggestion. Try not to use polls in your stories - if someone likes or dislikes it, they will ...

Hey Savingewoks! First off - AMAZING username! It's just adorable. Second, you're going to love it here at YWS. It's such an amazing community for young writers - there's so ...

Okay, I finished Bickazer and Conrad! I'll start with your stuff Maki when I have time again.

Hey Conrad! The costumes of the other party-goers, both human and enchanted alike, swirled about in an assorted collage of strangeness as they danced, drank, and mingled with one another; ...

Hey Bickazer! Here goes my second review for you. =D What the hell does that word even mean anymore? I mean, I swear “I love you” is the most fucking ...

Hey Bickazer! For me, that “something” would be music. Stylistically, I don't think it's necessary to put something in quotes, and think it will look better without the quotes. That's ...