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Hey Maki! She was taking quick, small sips of her coffee, in the early morning. I think the phrasing would be more smooth here if you phrased it like this: ...

I really like developing characters. Writing and writing and then adding more descriptions and more depth with each event until you have a character you think is brave but an ...

I was in a small car accident once (or two, maybe... not sure if one counts... deer...) so I can describe that to you. :) The commercials you see are ...

I've read too many books, egh. Hm, romance books. I recommend the Apple Vally Orchard series, but I don't remember who wrote them. I guess you could google that! Also, ...

So you don't want painful details? Alright, I'll be broad. :) I thought this was a very good poem. A really great analyzing of what happens in the moments before ...

I haven't read a good fantasy series in a while - like five years! I should act on your recommendation. :P

I request a key to reference for all these name changes. :P

Hey! Welcome to YWS! Do you play the same videogames as your brother? He just confused the heck out of me in chat just now. XD And what do you ...

What in the world is going on? And who is GoatSurrender? o_O

[Disclaimer: Once I finish this awful paper that's due tomorrow, a review will be in place of this disclaimer] Disclaimer fulfilled! I am back. So, a selkie couple had been ...

Right now I really really REALLY want this paper to write itself. o_o

Heya Drama queen! Welcome to the asylum - er, YWS! This is such an amazing community for young writers - there's a lot of support and advice! The community forums ...

Ah! Sorry it took me so long to critique this. I really kept glancing over it in my inbox - how embarrassing! I'm on it right now though. :wink: We...mind. ...

I have to agree with Sureal. Can we not think about assassinations? :roll: How morbid.

Go university students! Look at all the genius things we do... yes, "we"... I'm thinking up something like this right now, actually.... :) Only 250 each? Holy affordable! Very few ...