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Re: Clo takes a hack at hack poetry.... hack [Clo's clumsy NaPo]
Yeah, I hate the end of this first poem -- it is too fast. But I'm too preoccupied with catching up to try to fix it, haha. But thank you ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: to the mercy of the fire (Pantaloons' NaPoWriMo 2010)
Whoa, April 3rd is the best! That's the kind of unique relationship poem that I like, and the very ending: he watches, because he cannot look away. Makes it all ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: A Mad Dash (2010 NaPo)
In your eyes I saw the size of the heart you kept on your tongue, I really really love these lines. This poem overall is my favorite, I love the ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: tiepolo's hound -- Kylan's NaPoWriMo Thread
Kylan, you have such a way with words. I have a request though. I'm a fan of short little poems, and I would like to see you do one. I'm ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Clo takes a hack at hack poetry.... hack [Clo's clumsy NaPo]
4.1. Jarring Sometimes the Spring sun brings me new feelings that I've been pushing off for the long winter months, they fill me up; you know – aren't I just ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Clo takes a hack at hack poetry.... hack [Clo's clumsy NaPo]
Yeah, I'm dumping them all here, so watch out, world.
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: A is For
Oh wow, thanks a lot everyone. :) I was planning on making a few changes to it, but I'm glad everyone liked it so much!
Mar 19, 2010 -
Re: A is For
A is For I. It begins as a thought that sparks across the space between each ear, and I have to hunt it down, dash wild around my brain until ...
Mar 15, 2010 -
Re: Breaking
Hello-- I really like this poem, because it's so succinct and reflects something that is a problem/concern for many people. A lot of people who do have something wrong going ...
Feb 8, 2010 -
Re: Our Own Private Betrayal
This is such an awesome little poem, Connie. I like short poems because they're quick to memorize and then you can remember them easily at times when you might need ...
Feb 8, 2010 -
Re: Sleepy Living
Though waking up often is a difficult task, the heaviness and blissfully blank way my mind lays out limp in all directions is so much appreciated that I do wish ...
Feb 8, 2010 -
Re: snow falling on cedars
Hey you - oh my god, I know, I'm reviewing, isn't this nuts?! chimes of ice hang from the saplings like bells attached to gypsy ankles, cold, and clear-voiced as ...
Feb 8, 2010 -
Re: This Body has No Soul
Hey Write! --- Since the day you left, everything I tried to forget, An order of the mind, An unaccomplished task by the broken heart This part seems incomplete. You ...
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: Possible Change to YWS Header: No Rainbow?
ABSOLUTELY NOT. Rainbow must stay.
Sep 15, 2009 -
Re: Cats vs. Dogs
I love cats so much that it trumps everyone else.
Sep 6, 2009
