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Hey Ky-- And you'd better lock up your guns to, sweetie.” Too. I'm not sure if anyone's already pointed out this typo. I noticed what Connie wrote about the third ...

Hey Stori-- I absolutely love this poem, because it is simple and sweet. And it could be vouched that there can never be enough poems about cats. The title says ...

Hey Roo! I will be your friendly neighborhood reviewer. =) This was the [s]moment that twenty-two year-old Cora Sands was incarcerated, and the[/s] day the world as she knew it ...

Hey Stori! I bristled. "Sir, I'm an executive, not a magician's helper!" You already state he's agitated, so maybe no exclamation point. It makes it seem too loud and snappish, ...

Hey Blink! You're an instructor now! The swing swings in the wind. I know you probably did this on a purpose, but I don't think it works well. Swing swings ...

Hey 200! He wandered slowly into the hallway, climbed the cramped staircase, and came to the next landing, Moya panting and wagging her tail behind him. You can split this ...

Hey 200! The house was, quite literally, falling apart. You really don't need commas here. "The house was quite literally falling apart". He had taken a taxi from the Hôtel ...

Ky -- Very experimental. But you know what, it's still amazing writing. The concepts are all very intricate, so each individual word has to be read and considered so the ...

The story cuts off at a weird point for various reasons. Still developing the rest. Forgive. _____ Now I speak to you, are you in there? You have her face ...

Ky -- I apologize again for being so late getting to reviews. Maria's story is too hasty. I really love Maria's character, but I feel like her story is made ...

Connie! I'm not sure if you want these parts reviewed at all. I know you planned on making revisions. I'm sure my two cents can't hurt. I'm not going to ...

I'll say awesome however I please, because Instructors are awesome! :)

What in the --? Pork! My immediate reaction to this can hardly be put into words, let me step away from the laptop for a moment and think. Okay. Okay-- ...

Uh... I'll write a lot, a lot of reviews, but I'm not guaranteeing anywhere near 1000.

Purps forever. Purps didn't have any outside help. :)