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Hey Ducati-- I didn’t look at anyone in particular as I lent against the bar; You say he usually doesn't look at anyone, past tense, describing habit, and then you ...

SHERRY! Connie's sister! I'm friends with your brother. I will tutor you, young grasshoppah. This site is actually really awesome, and you get harsh/genuine feedback for your writing here. And ...

You don't have to point out everything that is wrong with a piece of writing when you critique. It's better to only focus and develop tips on a few things ...

A click a week. How's that sound?

Bumper. Hey Icaruss-- Rain. It is cold but not as cold as it used to be. It seems strange to start off with just one word in it's own paragraph, ...

Books, my laptop doesn't take comp games too well. Loud music or dead silence?

Banned for continuing that awful streak of banning people for post numbers.

Uncomfortable. Family Guy or the Simpsons?

Emily. I adore Wuthering Heights.

Hey Hassan! Dialogue tags such as "he said" and "informed my dad" (from the beginning of your story) should be in the same paragraph as the dialogue. I'm not sure ...

Hey Meepster. “Hail Mary, full of grace, the Lord is with thee. Blessed art thou amongst women, and blessed it the fruit of thy womb, Jesus. Holy Mary, Mother of ...

Mizz! So YOU are the reason why there's diaper ads around YWS! I think you should be proud. I was really baffled why they started showing up. Or maybe I'm ...

Hey Sunny! I wouldn't really be worrying about length. Some books have chapters that are like two pages, others have thirty page chapters. Styles and structures vary - and this ...

Hey Shanya! I love your avatar - the Hush Sound kick butt! But onto the review. Right off the bat, just glancing over this, it's obvious your paragraphs are much, ...

This is so exciting! And such a good idea too. :)