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Re: 16th Street
Kylan, thanks for the reminder. I can always count on you to make me not forget! :) -- The heat presses down on our city like an clothing iron and ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Question!
98K is not too long... unless your actual storyline stretches on for too long. You shouldn't go by word count too much, no matter what NaNo seems to instigate, because ...
Jan 27, 2009 -
Re: Charlotte of the Pulverized Caterpillars; I
Hey Hannah! This title certainly is an attention grabber. I would say though that perhaps it did not receive reviews because you posted so many items simultaneously. The best method ...
Jan 27, 2009 -
Re: Unzipped; I
Hey Hannah! She wondered if he’d gotten it all planned out the way she had. When writing fiction, there are some low-class, icky words that should try to be avoided, ...
Jan 26, 2009 -
Re: The Simpsons vs Family Guy
Though Family Guy seems to be largely inspired by the very existence of the Simpsons, I find it hard to say which is better because they seem to satisfy different ...
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: Crespuscola e Morte Chapter 1
Angie, dear! On an evening as dark as soot and as chilled as death, two men were walking down the road. They were haggard, with clothes that looked to have ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Slumdog Millionaire?!
I absolutely loved this movie to several pieces.
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Abyss
Connie muffin cake sweetie-- The darkness dreams in his prison. Since you're working on a personification, I think you should kick "the" and start with "Darkness dreams in his prison". ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
It was a short story by F. Scott Fitzgerald. And it was an amazing movie. I thought the ending was done very well especially.
Jan 23, 2009 -
Re: Presidential Inauguration
June said nothing racist, Blink. Read a little closer before saying anything like that. :roll:
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Presidential Inauguration
I am proud of my country and my president.
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Newbie!
*pounces on Jebbie* Welcome! This is an awesome writing site, and I'm sure a lot of Greeters (the blue names) are going to flood in here and tell you what's ...
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: Report a good member!
Mars >> lol, Freakforchrist xD
Jan 20, 2009 -
Re: Any newbies who need Avatar/icon help?
This is a nice idea. :) I usually go to the for icons. They have a wide variety there.
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Morning
Hey Gahks! I'm not a very big poetry person, so I'm not promising an amazingly technical review, but I'll just say what I think and hopefully that will help! Upon ...
Jan 19, 2009
